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It all started with a dream, it then became a prophecy and today it is a legacy. When the sage of the sixth path discovered ninjutsu, a curse was unleashed in this world. The Sage of the sixth path then had a dream to restore peace and give sanctuary to this cursed world. He died and the dream to restore peace became a prophecy. A Old toad once said as he looks at his crystal orb, " One day two child will meet each other this Childs are the Childs of prophecy " they will be the one to restore peace. The old sage also had said that the Sannin with white hair would travel around the world in search of peace. He was correct he found one of the child from the prophecy his name was nagato. Years later the second child of the prophecy was found his name was naruto uzmaki. Both had a dream that became prophecy, Their goal and only dream was to restore peace. Nagato believed peace could be found by pain, he believed that he could restore peace by controlling people with pain and soon peace would be restore and the people would even adapt to the pain and soon the world would be a peaceful place. It was the death of yahiko and his parent that change his heart his heart was cover in darkness and in pain. In the other hand the second child naruto uzumaki believed peace could be found if people could understand each other, he fallow the prophecy of his sensei the sannin with white hair Jiraiya. On one unlucky day the leaf village was attack by Nagato, and completely destroy both child fought in this battle field and nagato 6 body of pain were destroy by Naruto, once they had met face to face naruto believes to obtain peace change nagato allowing him to restore peace, doing so nagato sacrifice his life to restore the life of all the people he killed in that very day and moment. It was not soon that this prophecy became a Legacy pass from generation to generation and today peace is yet to be found is naruto the hero of this world or will this legacy continue or will you rest on the hands of Naruto Uzumaki. -The only way to restore peace is for everyone to understand each other - Will the legacy of darkness ever end? Will you be the one to find peace? Is the only way to restore peace is to kill all the standing member of Akatsuki and recover the tailed beast placing them once again in the hands of good? You be the judge, write your own destiny. Good or Evil, you be the judge!
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:: Basic Information ::


Name:Shoto
--Nicknames:
Gender: Male
age 16
Zodiac Sign: scorpio
Birth Date: november 23
Blood Type: A
Weight: 175
Height: 5"7'
Rank: gennin
Village: sand

:: Character Looks and Personality ::

Appearance: shoto is a tall stalky man who is very lanky and thin. he has brown hair wich he preferse to be spiked but it dousnt have to be. one eye is smaller than the other but it is really hard to tell unless your actually inspecting his face. he has a tall but thin face giving him the appearence of having a pointy chin. he wears size 13 shoes and has long skinny fingers.

Attire:
he wears a black trench coat that has the appearence of a cloak or robe, it has many pockets throught the jacket. there are 6 on the front and 4 on the inside. his foot wear is that of a tenishoe with the front missing it is laced all the way up to just under his knees. on one hand he has a velvet lace wrapped around his hand. on his chest is wrapping leading around his body to his back were the wrappings conceal his dolls and he may unwrap them when he is in battle.

Personality: shoto runs his life like his last day, he canot stand still for long and not being able to do anything for a long period of time actually angers him. shoto is known by his freinds as a protecter, because he will never leave his freinds alone in a fight, because he remembers what it was like feeling all alone when his father was taken from him and he thinks no one should ever go through that. he is almost always looking for ways to make people lauph, he is not intimidated easily and will often get himself in over his head by talking to much or saying the wrong thing to the wrong person. he would rather be around a small crowd than a big one but would rather be in a crowd than be alone.he likes stars and he somtimes gazes at them and wonders wether he was supposed to be in this world or in another.he loves nature and hates people who take things for granted.he respects his powers and he is gratful to have them, without them he could not have defeated and avenged his father.he ponders on wether or not his mother actually cared for him, and wonders when they will meet again.

Nindo:: to do all he can to help who he has trust and faith in.

:: Character Clan ::

Name of Clan:
Clan Ability:
Relationship in Clan:
Character Ability:nesting doll art ability:
shoto has the abillity to take a dead body, burn it and with the ash put it into a nesting doll and after a ritual is done the doll starts leaking colors and soon the persons body will be painted on the doll, the doll is carried by shoto. then he may summon the spirit of the dead person who was put into the doll to fight beside him.(like a poke ball)the spirit uses the doll as a portal back to the living world and it uses the ash to create their body again, they look like their spirits remember them wich would look like a normal human being with no damge done. lets say shoto cuts a mans head off and put him into a doll when he is summoned they wont come out headless, theyll come out like their spirits want them to be remembered like they normally did. the person has no emotion and no memory, they can not learn and they only have knowledge up until they died, and only follows shotos orders.each time he makes another doll he makes it one size bigger so that he may stack them and put them on his back.they may stay in the living world as long as he has enough chakra to keep the spirit in the body. once shoto dousnt need the person any more the body evaporates into ash and blows back into the doll and it may rest for a while, continueis use of the same doll over and over needs more chakra every time it is used, unless you let the spirit rest for a while. shoto may have more than one out at a time as well but it calls for more chakra. the dolls can suffers fatal damage and still keep fighting, they however take more chakra to keep them alive the more badly wounded they are.
:: Character Weapons and jutsu ::

stats:
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[ List your weapons in a simple list for basic items. ]

2x trench knives
30x senbon
20x shuriken
5x food for five days

[list your jutsu genin C chunin B jonin A]


name: spirit catcher jutsu
rank: C
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: self
clan: none
description: shoto can, with a open doll currently being used by one of the people he killed, use this jutsu to get sucked inside the doll and come out looking exactly like the person that occupied the doll. the spirit instead of creating a body out of the ash will instead occupy his body and the ash then creates the body over his physical apperance. their spirit than transfers their knowledge into shotos mind. shoto litaraly becomes the person. he may sustain this form depending on the amount of chakara.

name: outer layer doll jutsu
rank: D
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: self
clan: none
description:shoto can use this any time and it uses little chakra. this jutsu creates a large nesting doll around shoto, about 1 foot taller and 1 foot wider than he is. it may be used for sleep or it may be used defensivly, it is harder than most materials and not easy to open from the outside. it is painted like shoto on the outside. once in side he may use teleport doll jutsu, and escape to another location and return to the doll. if shoto leaves and dousnt return to the inside of the doll, it stays were it is giving the enemy the illusion of shoto still being in it.

name: lock space jutsu
rank: D
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: close
clan: none
description: shoto can use this jutsu on any container (it must be able to hold things). it creats a black hole inside the container where unimaginable amounts of items can be placed. he can use this jutsu on one of his empty dolls and use it as a book bag.he can turn this jutsu on and off, though if there is anything inside the container when he turns it off it is erased from existence and cant be retreaved.

name: teleport lock space doll jutsu
rank: C
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: far
clan: none
description: this jutsu may be used while near a doll(used or vacant). shoto may be sucked into the doll and he and the doll pop out of another doll of shotos choice, were ever it is(anything touching shoto will go with him). if you throw anything in, it will fling out the other doll of shotos choice as well.

name: doll typhoon jutsu
rank: B
type: nesting doll
element: varies
range: depending
clan: none
description: this jutsu calls for a mass amount of chakra. shoto, instead of calling the dolls out to make them use their jutsus, shoto call the spirits of all doll near him and combines them all inside him. from there shoto can swap body parts with the dolls and use all the jutsus that the spirits know, he can command all these at the same time. this jutsu weakens all the spirits shoto is controlling and uses alot of chakara.

name: doll army jutsu
rank: A
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: close
clan: none
description: all doll within a certain range are all summond at the same time, it uses alot of chakra to control them all, but it is good to have back up when your out numbered.

name: clone doll jutsu
rank: C
type: ninjutsu/nesting doll
element: none
range: varies
clan: none
description: when shoto uses this jutsu, shoto and all dolls called out at that time no matter how far away they are sprout 2 clones of them selves. so all together there is 2 clones and the real one.shoto may transfer chakra into the clones to alow them to actually physycaly hurt. but again it takes chakra to do so, how ever it douse not drain more chakra to just have them be clones.

name: exploding doll jutsu
rank: C
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: medium
clan: none
description: when shoto uses this jutsu, any doll of his choice that is out, he can make explode. the blast range verys on size of person. shoto may also detonate them all at once, although that will leave the doll that exploded exhausted and it would take a huge amount of chakra to call them out again.

name: stone doll jutsu
rank: C
type: nesting dolls
element: none
range: varies
clan: none
description: when shoto uses this jutsu, he can make all or a specific active doll freeze were it is, it wont be able to be moved by anything at all until shoto realeases the jutsu, they become harder than rock and cannot break easily. he could use this to block an attack, or to slowly regain chakra. while they are frozen they absorb little to no chakra from shoto. if one is destroyed they simply turn back to ash and return to his doll.


Character History and RP Sample

History:

shoto was born in sunagukure, his father was great freinds with the second kazekage, they trained and challenged eachother till they were sore. other than being great freinds with the second kaze, he was a good neibohre to everyone in the village, he helped people build houses, go shopping,geting cats out of trees, all the good stuff. one day a bunch of thugs came in to rob the store while he was there and he unlike most people he walked over adjusted himself firmly and roundhouse kicked one in the head , the thug then flew and broke out the window, the other tryed to pull off a punch but shotos father dodged it while still spinning from the kick . he then grabed the thugs arm and snaped it at the elbow and he brought his leg up and kicked him in the ribs, wich then after that he flew out the same window the first guy did. shotos father walked out and said "tell your boss or who ever your working for, they need to stay out of my village, ya hear"."better get that arm looked at". and with that, he walked away, hands in his pockets whistleing poorly. couple months passed and one day while shotos father was walking home from the kaze's office he noticed a baby with a note on it."i have lived in this world poorly and without consequence and i do not want my son to go through the same thing, you are a great man i know you will take care of my child". he looked at the baby in his hands and said "what a surprise, im a dad". he called the boy shoto, and he taught him all he knew, well almost all. one day shoto was rummaging around the house when he found three scrolls, he opened one and saw a beautiful picture of a nesting doll, it was black and white and along all the lines their were words. shoto admired the scroll until his father came and said "hay, kid your too young for this stuff mabye when your mormature we can talk about this". he took all three scrolls and locked them away. a few months passed, on shotos 7th birthday there was a celibration in the town square for just shoto. everyone in town new who he was, his dad was a great guy and everyone thought he had a great son. that night two crooks broke in and stabbed shotos father in the heart fourteen times, nothing was taken, just a life. there was a funiral held, the kaze was speaking a few words paying respect to a good man. shoto didnt attend, he was at home mourning in his own way, he tore the house apart in anger he thought he could have done somthing to stop the murderers. as he threw a bunch of papers of his fathers desk and as he fell to the ground weeping, one lonly scroll rolled to him it rolled open and there it was the beautiful nesting dall again, and so he startes reading and he soon figured out that there were instructions on the scroll from long ago, over the next several months he read in secret. he finished the scroll with the knowledge off a old lost technique,it taught him how to get revenge for his father. that night he carved a shape out of a tree stump, he sculpted for ours until it was perfect. the next morning he snuck into the grave yard and dug up his fathers body, took it back to the house and following the instructions on the scroll put his father in the oven. shoto waited for it to all burn he opened the door straight faced and scooped out the ashes into the wooden shape he had carved, after words he sat the wood shape on the table and sat staring at it thinking of his father really hard. soon after meditating a colurful drop fell from the object to the table, the the drip crawled back across the table, upthe side of the wood shape were it spread out changing colors. after everything settled on the doll shoto examined it close, on the doll was a portrait of his father clothes and all. "beautiful" shoto said with a smile. he grabed a small knap sack and put the doll,the scroll,some food, and a map of the reigeion. shoto got a tip from a woman in a different town that two thugs were seen starting fights in the bar, shoto thought for a minute and came up with a plan. everyday that week he went to the bar and peeked in and everyday no two thugs, then one day he peeked in and their were two men pointing a blade at the person behind the bar. he emmediatly ran back to his camp, got in his bag, pulled out his scroll and his fathers doll. "i hope this works" he said."SPIRIT CATCHER JUTSU". he got sucked into his fathers doll and when he emerged his mind his body his voice was all changed to his fathers."time for some payback". (read RP sample for the end)

RP Sample: [ Try to make it so it looks like an ACTUAL post. A usual post. ]


he slowly entered the bar and took a seat next to the two thugs, and said "mornin". they both turned white with horror,"dude, we killed you man,your dead". "no" shoto said "you are". shoto jumped up quickly and grabed the stool from under him and smashed it against the first ones head. as he staggered to the side, shoto kicked the second one in the left cheek and came in with two punches to the chest and then another kick was sent to the bottom of his chin.he flew backwards and smashed his back against the bar. the first one finally got his balance and charged at shoto, who turned slightly grabed his shoulders and threw him at the counter. shoto then walked up behind him placed one hand under his chin and one on his forehead and snaped his neck. he slid down the counter like curtains falling at a theater. now shotos attention was back at the one groanig about his back up against the counter. the thug drew a blade and stabed at shotos chest, he dodged it and grabed his wrist, a quick twist and it snaped. the thug dropped the knife and with shotos other hand he caught it. the thug was now weeping for mercy and shoto said "you didnt show my father mercy". a confused look apeared on the thugs face right before shoto stabed the blade deep in the thugs chest, he puled it out and reapeatedly started stabbing him in the chest. after fourteen stabs the bar was quite "do you need these" shoto said gesturing to the bodys. the bartender shook his head in sheer terror. shoto lobed the corpses over his shoulders and walked out.


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:: Basic Information ::


Name:Shoto
--Nicknames:
Gender: Male
age 16
Zodiac Sign: scorpio
Birth Date: november 23
Blood Type: A
Weight: 175
Height: 5"7'
Rank: gennin
Village: sand

:: Character Looks and Personality ::

Appearance: shoto is a tall stalky man who is very lanky and thin. he has brown hair wich he preferse to be spiked but it dousnt have to be. one eye is smaller than the other but it is really hard to tell unless your actually inspecting his face. he has a tall but thin face giving him the appearence of having a pointy chin. he wears size 13 shoes and has long skinny fingers.

Attire:
he wears a black trench coat that has the appearence of a cloak or robe, it has many pockets throught the jacket. there are 6 on the front and 4 on the inside. his foot wear is that of a tenishoe with the front missing it is laced all the way up to just under his knees. on one hand he has a velvet lace wrapped around his hand. on his chest is wrapping leading around his body to his back were the wrappings conceal his dolls and he may unwrap them when he is in battle.

Personality: shoto runs his life like his last day, he canot stand still for long and not being able to do anything for a long period of time actually angers him. shoto is known by his freinds as a protecter, because he will never leave his freinds alone in a fight, because he remembers what it was like feeling all alone when his father was taken from him and he thinks no one should ever go through that. he is almost always looking for ways to make people lauph, he is not intimidated easily and will often get himself in over his head by talking to much or saying the wrong thing to the wrong person. he would rather be around a small crowd than a big one but would rather be in a crowd than be alone.he likes stars and he somtimes gazes at them and wonders wether he was supposed to be in this world or in another.he loves nature and hates people who take things for granted.he respects his powers and he is gratful to have them, without them he could not have defeated and avenged his father.he ponders on wether or not his mother actually cared for him, and wonders when they will meet again.

Nindo:: to do all he can to help who he has trust and faith in.

:: Character Clan ::

Name of Clan:
Clan Ability:
Relationship in Clan:
Character Ability:nesting doll art ability:
shoto has the abillity to take a dead body, burn it and with the ash put it into a nesting doll and after a ritual is done the doll starts leaking colors and soon the persons body will be painted on the doll, the doll is carried by shoto. then he may summon the spirit of the dead person who was put into the doll to fight beside him.(like a poke ball)the spirit uses the doll as a portal back to the living world and it uses the ash to create their body again, they look like their spirits remember them wich would look like a normal human being with no damge done. lets say shoto cuts a mans head off and put him into a doll when he is summoned they wont come out headless, theyll come out like their spirits want them to be remembered like they normally did. the person has no emotion and no memory, they can not learn and they only have knowledge up until they died, and only follows shotos orders.each time he makes another doll he makes it one size bigger so that he may stack them and put them on his back.they may stay in the living world as long as he has enough chakra to keep the spirit in the body. once shoto dousnt need the person any more the body evaporates into ash and blows back into the doll and it may rest for a while, continueis use of the same doll over and over needs more chakra every time it is used, unless you let the spirit rest for a while. shoto may have more than one out at a time as well but it calls for more chakra. the dolls can suffers fatal damage and still keep fighting, they however take more chakra to keep them alive the more badly wounded they are.
:: Character Weapons and jutsu ::

stats:
Spoiler:

[ List your weapons in a simple list for basic items. ]

2x trench knives
30x senbon
20x shuriken
5x food for five days

[list your jutsu genin C chunin B jonin A]


name: spirit catcher jutsu
rank: C
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: self
clan: none
description: shoto can, with a open doll currently being used by one of the people he killed, use this jutsu to get sucked inside the doll and come out looking exactly like the person that occupied the doll. the spirit instead of creating a body out of the ash will instead occupy his body and the ash then creates the body over his physical apperance. their spirit than transfers their knowledge into shotos mind. shoto litaraly becomes the person. he may sustain this form depending on the amount of chakara.

name: outer layer doll jutsu
rank: D
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: self
clan: none
description:shoto can use this any time and it uses little chakra. this jutsu creates a large nesting doll around shoto, about 1 foot taller and 1 foot wider than he is. it may be used for sleep or it may be used defensivly, it is harder than most materials and not easy to open from the outside. it is painted like shoto on the outside. once in side he may use teleport doll jutsu, and escape to another location and return to the doll. if shoto leaves and dousnt return to the inside of the doll, it stays were it is giving the enemy the illusion of shoto still being in it.

name: lock space jutsu
rank: D
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: close
clan: none
description: shoto can use this jutsu on any container (it must be able to hold things). it creats a black hole inside the container where unimaginable amounts of items can be placed. he can use this jutsu on one of his empty dolls and use it as a book bag.he can turn this jutsu on and off, though if there is anything inside the container when he turns it off it is erased from existence and cant be retreaved.

name: teleport lock space doll jutsu
rank: C
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: far
clan: none
description: this jutsu may be used while near a doll(used or vacant). shoto may be sucked into the doll and he and the doll pop out of another doll of shotos choice, were ever it is(anything touching shoto will go with him). if you throw anything in, it will fling out the other doll of shotos choice as well.

name: doll typhoon jutsu
rank: B
type: nesting doll
element: varies
range: depending
clan: none
description: this jutsu calls for a mass amount of chakra. shoto, instead of calling the dolls out to make them use their jutsus, shoto call the spirits of all doll near him and combines them all inside him. from there shoto can swap body parts with the dolls and use all the jutsus that the spirits know, he can command all these at the same time. this jutsu weakens all the spirits shoto is controlling and uses alot of chakara.

name: doll army jutsu
rank: A
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: close
clan: none
description: all doll within a certain range are all summond at the same time, it uses alot of chakra to control them all, but it is good to have back up when your out numbered.

name: clone doll jutsu
rank: C
type: ninjutsu/nesting doll
element: none
range: varies
clan: none
description: when shoto uses this jutsu, shoto and all dolls called out at that time no matter how far away they are sprout 2 clones of them selves. so all together there is 2 clones and the real one.shoto may transfer chakra into the clones to alow them to actually physycaly hurt. but again it takes chakra to do so, how ever it douse not drain more chakra to just have them be clones.

name: exploding doll jutsu
rank: C
type: nesting doll
element: none
range: medium
clan: none
description: when shoto uses this jutsu, any doll of his choice that is out, he can make explode. the blast range verys on size of person. shoto may also detonate them all at once, although that will leave the doll that exploded exhausted and it would take a huge amount of chakra to call them out again.

name: stone doll jutsu
rank: C
type: nesting dolls
element: none
range: varies
clan: none
description: when shoto uses this jutsu, he can make all or a specific active doll freeze were it is, it wont be able to be moved by anything at all until shoto realeases the jutsu, they become harder than rock and cannot break easily. he could use this to block an attack, or to slowly regain chakra. while they are frozen they absorb little to no chakra from shoto. if one is destroyed they simply turn back to ash and return to his doll.


Character History and RP Sample

History:

shoto was born in sunagukure, his father was great freinds with the second kazekage, they trained and challenged eachother till they were sore. other than being great freinds with the second kaze, he was a good neibohre to everyone in the village, he helped people build houses, go shopping,geting cats out of trees, all the good stuff. one day a bunch of thugs came in to rob the store while he was there and he unlike most people he walked over adjusted himself firmly and roundhouse kicked one in the head , the thug then flew and broke out the window, the other tryed to pull off a punch but shotos father dodged it while still spinning from the kick . he then grabed the thugs arm and snaped it at the elbow and he brought his leg up and kicked him in the ribs, wich then after that he flew out the same window the first guy did. shotos father walked out and said "tell your boss or who ever your working for, they need to stay out of my village, ya hear"."better get that arm looked at". and with that, he walked away, hands in his pockets whistleing poorly. couple months passed and one day while shotos father was walking home from the kaze's office he noticed a baby with a note on it."i have lived in this world poorly and without consequence and i do not want my son to go through the same thing, you are a great man i know you will take care of my child". he looked at the baby in his hands and said "what a surprise, im a dad". he called the boy shoto, and he taught him all he knew, well almost all. one day shoto was rummaging around the house when he found three scrolls, he opened one and saw a beautiful picture of a nesting doll, it was black and white and along all the lines their were words. shoto admired the scroll until his father came and said "hay, kid your too young for this stuff mabye when your mormature we can talk about this". he took all three scrolls and locked them away. a few months passed, on shotos 7th birthday there was a celibration in the town square for just shoto. everyone in town new who he was, his dad was a great guy and everyone thought he had a great son. that night two crooks broke in and stabbed shotos father in the heart fourteen times, nothing was taken, just a life. there was a funiral held, the kaze was speaking a few words paying respect to a good man. shoto didnt attend, he was at home mourning in his own way, he tore the house apart in anger he thought he could have done somthing to stop the murderers. as he threw a bunch of papers of his fathers desk and as he fell to the ground weeping, one lonly scroll rolled to him it rolled open and there it was the beautiful nesting dall again, and so he startes reading and he soon figured out that there were instructions on the scroll from long ago, over the next several months he read in secret. he finished the scroll with the knowledge off a old lost technique,it taught him how to get revenge for his father. that night he carved a shape out of a tree stump, he sculpted for ours until it was perfect. the next morning he snuck into the grave yard and dug up his fathers body, took it back to the house and following the instructions on the scroll put his father in the oven. shoto waited for it to all burn he opened the door straight faced and scooped out the ashes into the wooden shape he had carved, after words he sat the wood shape on the table and sat staring at it thinking of his father really hard. soon after meditating a colurful drop fell from the object to the table, the the drip crawled back across the table, upthe side of the wood shape were it spread out changing colors. after everything settled on the doll shoto examined it close, on the doll was a portrait of his father clothes and all. "beautiful" shoto said with a smile. he grabed a small knap sack and put the doll,the scroll,some food, and a map of the reigeion. shoto got a tip from a woman in a different town that two thugs were seen starting fights in the bar, shoto thought for a minute and came up with a plan. everyday that week he went to the bar and peeked in and everyday no two thugs, then one day he peeked in and their were two men pointing a blade at the person behind the bar. he emmediatly ran back to his camp, got in his bag, pulled out his scroll and his fathers doll. "i hope this works" he said."SPIRIT CATCHER JUTSU". he got sucked into his fathers doll and when he emerged his mind his body his voice was all changed to his fathers."time for some payback". (read RP sample for the end)

RP Sample: [ Try to make it so it looks like an ACTUAL post. A usual post. ]


he slowly entered the bar and took a seat next to the two thugs, and said "mornin". they both turned white with horror,"dude, we killed you man,your dead". "no" shoto said "you are". shoto jumped up quickly and grabed the stool from under him and smashed it against the first ones head. as he staggered to the side, shoto kicked the second one in the left cheek and came in with two punches to the chest and then another kick was sent to the bottom of his chin.he flew backwards and smashed his back against the bar. the first one finally got his balance and charged at shoto, who turned slightly grabed his shoulders and threw him at the counter. shoto then walked up behind him placed one hand under his chin and one on his forehead and snaped his neck. he slid down the counter like curtains falling at a theater. now shotos attention was back at the one groanig about his back up against the counter. the thug drew a blade and stabed at shotos chest, he dodged it and grabed his wrist, a quick twist and it snaped. the thug dropped the knife and with shotos other hand he caught it. the thug was now weeping for mercy and shoto said "you didnt show my father mercy". a confused look apeared on the thugs face right before shoto stabed the blade deep in the thugs chest, he puled it out and reapeatedly started stabbing him in the chest. after fourteen stabs the bar was quite "do you need these" shoto said gesturing to the bodys. the bartender shook his head in sheer terror. shoto lobed the corpses over his shoulders and walked out.

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