Contest: Writing [Valid: 9/21/10]

This is a contest to see who can write better. Today's theme is poetry, whether or not you can write dark, happy, or confusing poetry, post it here and we will have someone everyone vote on who should win.

My submition:
My Mask by Naethyn

I Put It On
Everyday
You Dont
even
notice...

Its not a real mask,
Not a thick layer of makeup
Its something way
/way/ more then that.

I put on this mask
It's an emotional mask,
When you aren't here
It drips off like paint in the rain.

This concealer
It makes me
Happy.

It keeps you out
of my affairs.

It keeps you out
of my life.

You think
That I am your friend
But who I remove this mask for
Is who is my friend.

Those of you who dont know
If I am wearing this mask
Will find out,
I'll break down

cry

shed

tears

of

pure

d
e
p
r
e
s
s
i
o
n

The great wandering sea,
Its blue glow around it, holds thousands of creatures
Waves crash, it calls for its companions,
The creatures give attention to it and the wave stops, but they forget about there good ol' friend and the waves continue...
Always a storm... Never to rest.. With the Sea's growing loneliness, the storm grows.