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Rekon Tabaki
Posts : 3 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-12-13
| Subject: Rekon ((Charrie for Rekon Tabaki)) Fri Dec 17, 2010 11:00 am | |
| Name: Rekon Tabaki Nicknames: Nicknames. [ Applies to S rank only. ] Gender: [ Male or Female. ]Male age: 12 Zodiac Sign: [ Chinese Zodiac sign. Try using Bing. ]Tiger Birth Date: Birth date of your character.: June 6, 1998 Blood Type: Blood Type. [ A A- B B- O- O AB- AB ]A Weight: How much does he/she weight?: 101 pounds Height: How tall is he/she? 5'3 Rank: Village Rank and Letter rank.: Genin ((Gonna take chunnin exams)) D Village: What village is your character in: Leaf. | |
| | | Senjuzumaki
Posts : 682 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2010-12-03
| Subject: Re: Rekon ((Charrie for Rekon Tabaki)) Fri Dec 17, 2010 11:05 am | |
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| | | Rekon Tabaki
Posts : 3 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-12-13
| Subject: Re: Rekon ((Charrie for Rekon Tabaki)) Sat Dec 18, 2010 7:16 am | |
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| | | Senjuzumaki
Posts : 682 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2010-12-03
| Subject: Re: Rekon ((Charrie for Rekon Tabaki)) Sat Dec 18, 2010 9:07 am | |
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[b]Name of Clan:[/b] [b]Clan Ability:[/b] [b]Relationship in Clan:[/b] [b]Character Ability:[/b]
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| | | Rekon Tabaki
Posts : 3 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-12-13
| Subject: Re: Rekon ((Charrie for Rekon Tabaki)) Wed Dec 22, 2010 6:09 am | |
| :: Basic Information :: Name:Rekon Tabaki -- Nicknames:Rikki and Reko Gender:Male age age off char: 13 Zodiac Sign:Aires Birth Date:April, 5, 1994 Blood Type:A Weight:105 Height:5'5 Rank:Gennin, Going to take the Chunnin exams Village:Leaf :: Character Looks and Personality :: Appearance:Brown haired boy, He keeps his headband on his head and is also lation skinned. Star symbol on his hand that he dosent know what it means but finds out. Attire:Blue shirt with black shorts. And red shoes. Personality:He is a nice boy and will do anything for his friends. He will risk his life for them. He also has been sarcatic some times. He feels underestimated some times but he also likes to prove himself. Nindo::Im never gonna run away, never gonna cry, I'll protect everyone by my side no matter what, and I wont DIE! :: Character Clan :: Name of Clan:Leaf Clan Ability:Fire Relationship in Clan:Born there Character Ability:Fire :: Character Weapons and jutsu :: [ List your weapons in a simple list for basic items. ] Five shurkien three Kunai one shor ninja sowrd Elements: [Chakra elements you have]Fire and Wood and wind Main:Fire, and Wind Subs:Wood Jutsu Template Name:Rasengan Rank: A Type:Ninjutsu Element:Wind Range:Short Range Clan: Leaf Description:Makes a spiraling Sphere in hands of user and then attacks the person by knocking them back Name:Fireball Jutsu Rank: B Type:Ninjutsu Element:Fire Range:Long Range Clan: Uchia Description:Shoots fire at opponent Name:Fireclone Jutsu Rank: B Type:Ninjutsu Element:Fire Range:Long Range Clan: Leaf Description:Shoots fire at opponent Character History and RP Sample History: Rekon was born an orphan and left with his uncle in the leaf. He made a great bond with his uncle who was a retired Black ops. His uncle showed him three jutsu before he died and showed him the way of a Ninja. Told him about the things that were going on in the world. Which made Rekon even more inspired. But one day a man came to the house and killed his uncle. Angered Rekon attacked the man and broke every bone in the mans body. He moved in with his Grandma then and was enrolled in the Ninja academy. Rekon had made some friends at the age of 11 and then now he is taking Chunin exams. RP Sample: [ Try to make it so it looks like an ACTUAL post. A usual post. ] Rekon slept. Dreaming about his parents but then he heared a noise. He quickly took his sword. He looked down the side of the wall and saw it was an ninja attacking his uncle. The man had killed his grandpa. Rekon was so angry he yelled. The mand quickly came to guard "You killed my Uncle!" He screamed. The man came at him with two clones and Rekon destroyed them both. The man slashed Rekons hand and gave him a cut. Them and ran at Rekon and Rekon jumped out the way while in the air he threw his sword stabbing the man. "You BASTARD!" He yelled. Rekon kicked him in the face. He did a handsign and made fire clones. "AHH!" And they all kicked the man in the face killing him. Rekon took his sword. ((Finnished)) | |
| | | Septimus Senju
Posts : 332 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2010-11-01 Age : 27 Location : Sin City
| Subject: Re: Rekon ((Charrie for Rekon Tabaki)) Wed Dec 22, 2010 7:31 am | |
| Alright then........there are a few holes in this app......I'll point them out for you: 1: Genin can only use up too their Rank, which is C.... 2: You can't use Wood without being a Senju. And I didn't know there was a Clan called leaf, is it a Village? If so they are different things. 3: More on personality and Appearance.
That'll do for now. | |
| | | Kami
Posts : 336 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-10-15
| Subject: Re: Rekon ((Charrie for Rekon Tabaki)) Wed Dec 22, 2010 12:29 pm | |
| Last time I checked, a genin is aloud to have one B rank jutsu. Other than that, what Senju said was true. | |
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