Atreyu Ker

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Name: Atreyu Ker
--Nicknames:
Gender: Male
age: 15
Zodiac Sign: Taurus
Birth Date: 4/30/95
Blood Type: B
Weight: 145
Height: 5' 8''
Rank: Genin
Village: Village Hidden in the Sand


Appearance: Mediocre in height, Atreyu stands five foot eight. A tan complexion indicates a life in the blazing sun. Dark crimson hair set on top of an angular face with bored, expressionless eyes above a small pointed nose and thin, cracked lips set in a frown. Atreyu has a thin neck and a span shoulder to shoulder of about a foot. Atreyu's body is skinny and lightly muscled.

Attire: Atreyu wears his black headband as a collar. he has a black cloak with a yellow upside down smiley face pin to hold it together. underneath his cloak he wears a tan shirt and black, cotton slacks tied at the bottom with bandages.

Personality: Atreyu is bored with life and shows it through sarcastic comments. although he doesnt show it, Atreyu is very devoted to the ninja way of life, and his village.Atreyu will take every chance to crack a sarcastic comment, yet is unwaveringly devoted to his friends, willing to go to any lengths to save his friends. Atreyu is honest to those that deserve his trust.

Nindo:: Fight for the power to protect the people.


Name of Clan: N/A
Clan Ability: N/A
Relationship in Clan: N/A
Character Ability: N/A


Kunai
Senbon
Shurikan
Explosive Tags

Elements: N/A
Main: N/A
Subs: N/A

Jutsu Template
Name: Lightning Release Shadow Clone
Rank: C
Type: offensive/ supplementary
Element: lightning
Range: Mid-long range
Clan: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to make a shadow clone infused with lightning. Because it is a shadow clone, it is able to perform jutsu and interact with the environment due to it having physical substance. If the clone is injured, it will revert to its natural lightning-state, at the same time electrocuting whatever it is touching.

Name: body replacement technique
Rank: E
Type: supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: short
Clan: N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach using the Body Flicker Technique, the moment an attack hits. This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. The user can then use this confusion to escape or launch a counter-attack. Exploding tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.

Name: Remote exploding tag
Rank: D
Type: offensive/ supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: short-mid range
Clan: N/A
Description: This is a jutsu that allows the user to remotely detonate an explosive tag. If there is more than one, the explosions are done in sequence. This jutsu is mainly used when the user is laying a trap and is simply waiting for the unsuspecting ninja to reach the area where the blast radius will either kill or severely injure them.[1] There is also an alternate version of this technique where the user attaches them to kunai and uses the hand sign "Snake" to detonate them after throwing them at a target, making them into flying bombs.


History:

Atreyu was abandoned at the age of five months just after he stopped nursing. His mother left him in the village
of the sand, in an orphanage. from a young age Atreyu had a skeptical view on life, but he knew his dream. it was to be a shinobi. however he excelled at his school work and soon became bored. Atreyu had to put little to no effort into his work, his genius as a strategist was soon recognized. he won an award for his essay over battle tactics at the age of eight. at nine Atreyu was able to solve a puzzle box in 1 minute thirty-nine seconds. at age ten Atreyu learned his first jutsu. He has always wondered what it would be like to go on ninja missions. at age thirteen Atreyu entered the ninja academy. after passing at the top of his class he entered his life as a genin.

RP Sample: Atreyu looked into the moonlight and sighed. this would be a long journey. he looked down towards the desert horizon and slowly set foot out of the village he grew up in. after walking about a hundred feet under he clear night sky, stars twinkling brightly, Atreyu noticed a small leaf floating. it would go unnoticed, except that he lived in the desert. Atreyu became more alert, and noticed a small paw print pressed in the ground lightly as if from a small animal, such as a dog. He then noticed a familiar scent. The scent of maple and pine. Atreyu smiled and laughed. just then a dog with floppy ears leaped out from behind a cactus, and knocked Atreyu down and licked his face repeatedly. Atreyu said, "How am i supposed to get any work down if you keep licking me."
"simple," said the dog, "you don't."
Atreyu laughed. "Im supposed to go on a mission."
The pug let him up and they continued to walk down the cool desert path.

Appearance and personality are too short. Not enough jutsu. If you don't get all that you can you may handicap yourself.

Senju, they are good enough for Genins. I know you did more, but not all genins do that much. And on the jutsu thing, it would be better for him to add them, but if he doesn't want starter jutsus, he doesn't need them.