A fable I made for school ...

Wings of Dawn

A radiant figure reflected on a green landscape rose to welcome morning on the hearts of those who lived north. Soon this radiant object would welcome a dusky figure north then once more the Radiant object rose but this time it warmed the hearts of the people who lived south all was peaceful and calm eventually one bird sang “Hello their fellow mate such a beautiful morning it is” the other bird say “Oh yes indeed” both bird had fiery golden wings however another bird whose wings where dark and cold said in his mysterious voice “Oh…no the day is not bright the day is dark like the colors of my wings” The other two bird replied how come Crow the crow did not speak all it did was ignore and rest. That same morning both phoenix rose high altitudes flying north once they have made it north it was already dusky however they hadn’t seen night their fiery feathers are as radiant as that of the gigantic figure of the sky known as the sun once north the phoenix’s bird had notice the sun become more radiant every day they did not why they would always fly north and south and never see night eventually the phoenix lived and lived however they had internal life as for the poor crow he had die thousands of year ago a radiant figure lights up in the sky but this time the phoenix rose up in the air and once more they flap their wings north and then south and then back and forth noticing the sun becoming even more radiant than their own flashy wings they thought the sun was just happy and wanted to welcome north and south with more joy but poor bird they didn’t even have a clue of what was happening all was good but then night came early “The birds had never seen night as they have finally stayed in the north” seen night they scatter the area in search for friends however all they found was a foul aroma many dead birds in the ground mostly white birds they did not know what or what exactly was going on ? but the next morning when they had travel north and south again they had seen the problem who would of guess a factory running for a thousand year would cause such grave problem though not one factory but hundredths of them south and north still confuse both the phoenix said what are those… first time I see them however the reason why the phoenix had not seen them is because they have been too busy flying back and forth and not been on the lookout but poor birds night had come early for them yet the sun remains in the sky, as the bird flap their wings they had been stricken by the ray of the sun that had escaped the layers of earth the birds had die their last memory had been those words of the old crow who would of known that the old crow has seen a peak of the future or could it had been that the phoenix had been blind all along from the true world or have they simply been thinking too much of their beauty and eternal life but poor birds they didn’t know they would also die eventually but then again why did they ignore the bird of black wings why, was it because it was ugly and creepy and not shiny like them but too bad for the phoenixs they had been blind by their own shadows.

-By: Nelson Noa
Authors Name: Nelson Noa
Forum Name: Alpha

Nelson is my real life name.

Haha I like this quite alot, more then of Mice and Men. As it is about something interesting and well just good english and that.

Kyran95 wrote:

Haha I like this quite alot, more then of Mice and Men. As it is about something interesting and well just good english and that.

Thanks what do you think was the lesson from the fable.

Take notice of your environment?

Very professional like.

Thanks

Interesting... I like...

cool I say a Chapter 2!!

Is a fable they don't get a chapter 2 however my book will have tons of chapters.