Yin Inko{DONE)

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:: Basic Information ::

Name:Yin Inko
--Nicknames:village light
Gender:male
age13
Zodiac Sign:bull
Birth Date:9/12/1997
Blood Type: AB+
Weight:130
Height:5'2
Rank:Genin
Village:Leaf

:: Character Looks and Personality ::

Appearance: $Yin Inko{DONE) 37124_sasuke_2$
yin has light and darkish colored eyes.Has shot and somewhat spiky jet black hair.His skin is a light tan colored but it looks like adark tan when u first meet hm.

Attire:Black short sleave shirt with a jet black holder for his swordd,With black jeans with a blak belt with a blakc belt.

Personality:Yin is a very nic person.He does not like to hurt anything.he would only hurt someone he gets into a fight with.He cares about his friends and his village.He will do anything to save his friends and his friends but if it came sown to the two his friends would come first.Yin likes to practice alot and get stronger everyday until he surpasses his dead older brother who he misses very much.He loves and i mean loves ramen and eats it every time he can.

Nindo::Become strong and protect the ones u care aout!

:: Character Clan ::

Name of Clan:Inko and hensi clan
Clan Ability:dark and light chakra release
Relationship in Clan:blood reletive
Character Ability:can use his chakra better then anyone else in his clan and he is deadly when he uses them together.

:: Character Weapons and jutsu ::

Kunaix10
demon wind shurikenx3

the three basic jutsu

Character History and RP Sample

History:
Birth Arc:when Yin was born in the into the famous clans,hensi and inko.He was born in the place with both light and dark.Yin is apart of two clans the hensi and inko so he had both of there kekki genkai light and dark chakra release.After He was born he was taken to the leaf village to become a great ninja in the land of fire.

Genin arc:
Yin was bought to the live in the hidden leaf village for 13 long years.On the year of his 13th birthday he was sent to the academy to learn and become a ninja.He was horrible at it at first and almost failed the academy.He said he just wasn't fit to be a nina but his father kenji hensi old him he did.After the words from his father he did better at the academy.He did so much in the academy he grDUted as the top student in the whole school.On his 13th birthday he graduated from the academy and was glad to be genin and one more step to become a greatninja and that day because he made his nido.Become stronger and protect the ones u care about!.After his 13th birthday and his perents were so proud of him they gave him hi own appartment.After moving into his new appartment riku began to train every chance he got.Riku didn't even care if h is tired he will train and become the greatest ninja and surpass the old heros of his clans that were very powerful.

RP Sample: Yin was sitting in the dark of the silent night and was bored.He had come out into the night to train his dark type chakra but that was hours ago and everyone was asleep and he had nothing to do.Yin stared into the night sky like a wolf and didn't look down.He stayed out for a couple more minutes n the dim unlighted night and went home to sleep.As he was heading back to his house befor a black kunai darted out from the bushs.Riku had jumped away quick enought for it to only make a tiny scare on his arm."who was that"Riku said as he went toward the bush and a black figure jumped into the night sky looking like a demon with moon eyes.What is that riku ask himself befor the figure threw more kuni and almost hit riku befor he cloud take out hi s own kunai and block them.The figure jumped down to the ground and rushed twords him.Riku did the same thing riku and the figure clashed swords until the figure was sucked into the bright moonlight and the figure became a shape of his father."dad!"riku said as he put his kunai down."yep in he flesh"His father said as he put his kunai down"why are you here"Riku ased."I wanted to test your skill and see if you sevive my attack"His father said with a smile "Well i did and why would u do that"riku asked."Lets talk about that at you place"Rikus father said as he put his arm around his sons neck and started to wake.

Posts : 336 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-10-15

Nope... Just nope.. I will not allow you to use Ying-Yang Release as you would be OP, also. I require you to write your appearance out, even with a picture... Please fix these things as you are finishing.

Posts : 336 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-10-15

Dark Light... Hmmm.. Doesn't seem OP... All looks good so far. ^.^

Posts : 48 Reputation : 0 Join date : 2010-11-01

Well i have something to say about it. We don't want a bunch of identical clans. There already is a Dark release clan so I think it would be best if you said you had that Kekkei Genkai and your new Light release in another Kekkei Genkai; like how the 5th Mizukage had two bloodlines. That way we don't have fifty different Kekkei Genkai that do the same thing.

Here is the link to the approved Clans:

http://www.narutoland.net/clan-kekkei-genkai-sign-up-f10/approved-clan-kekkei-genkai-archive-t547.htm

SO i would say, put that you have both the Hensi(Dark Release) and the Inko(Light Release) Kekkei Genkai.

Posts : 145 Reputation : 4 Join date : 2010-09-17

Ok here's the deal. You seem to have ignored the comments above. In short your app is short.

In areas like appearence, attire, and personality there needs to be atleast 300 words for each one. Currently you have a history of about 180 words and a rp sample of 74 words. You chose no jutsu to speak of except for the initial 3 which is completely up to you. Not very wise, but again up to you. I can't approve this app as it is

DENIED

Posts : 336 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-10-15

Zenaku, he is just a genin, they don't have 300... Though they are still to short as is. Please be more descriptive, its all about the detail. Your history needs to be a little longer for my liking, and RP sample needs to be atleast 150 for a genin. Please fix these things.