Kyoraku Asakura{Done}

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:: Basic Information ::

Name:Kyoraku Asakura(Uchiha)
--Nicknames:Kyo
Gender:Male
age:15
Zodiac Sign:Scorpio
Birth Date:10/30
Blood Type:Universal
Weight:168
Height:5'11
Rank:Genin
Village:Leaf

:: Character Looks and Personality ::

Kyo is a somewhat tall person, he also is not very big. He is about a normal size and weight for a person his age. His hair is all white and could be mistake for silver in the moonlight. He wears and all black uniform in which he changes from every now and then, he also might cut his hair. He likes trying on new things.

Appearance:
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Attire:He wears an all black outfite, that has two strings attach to it, he also wears his Swords on his back.He also sitches his outfits from time to time.

Personality:Kyōraku is a laid back and flamboyant man, evident in his style of dress and general attitude, and he is rarely seen without a smile on his lips. In his off time, he can be seen drinking sake in bars and napping. He likes steamed buns that go with sake, but dislikes powdered green tea. Other times, he likes to chase after women. Kyōraku is a peace-loving person who will always try to talk his way out of a fight, though he doesn't wish to insult opponents by refusing to fight. The slightly eccentric Kyōraku also seems to like making an impression on opponents. He also dislikes taking the life of innocent people.

Though Kyōraku tries to talk his way out of a fight, he does insist on fighting when the situation is grave. He always maintains a semblance of respect for his opponent and is polite in combat situations and prefers to fight one on one. Even when fighting powerful opponents, he never (or at least rarely) loses his cool, going as far as to make small talk and joke around with his opponents.

Kyōraku retains a level of humbleness and isn't overly arrogant about his strength. Kyōraku has shown a great distaste for fighting, telling one of his friends that it doesn't matter whether you owe someone or they owe you, as soon as you start fighting, you are in the wrong either way.

Nindo::Abandoning your friends is the height of cowardice.

:: Character Clan ::

Name of Clan:Uchiha
Clan Ability:Sharingan
Relationship in Clan:High Ranking Memeber
Character Ability:Ninjutsu, Taijutsu

:: Character Weapons and jutsu ::

List of weapons and jutus
Weapon

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E-Rank

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Character History and RP Sample

History:Childhood Arc
Kyo ran around his parent's house, chasing after his pet dog who was in possesion of his favorite shirt when all of a sudden, the front door burst open and one of Kyo's friends came running in, tears streaming down his face. "Kyo, Kyo you gotta help us! Micky and his friends are picking on Joey and Wesly again!" Kyo nodded and grabbed his wooden sword he had carved himself and headed down the road to meet Mick and his two stupid friends. "Hey, what the hell do you think you're doing?!" Kyo yelled as he approached them. He looked over to see joey and Wesly huddling together in fear and sighed. Wesley laughed and turned to face Kyo and pointed to him. "I was just hitting some girls and now, I'm gonna hit another one! Now drop the stick you sissy!" Kyo threw the stick to the side and ran at Micky at full speed and punched him in the gut. Immediately afterwards, he grabbed the back of Micky's head and smashed it into his knee and pushed the dazed Micky onto the ground. As expected, Micky's two little grunts ran off crying. Kyo turned to his two friends and held out his hands. "Are y'all alright? Hey, they're gone now so relax guys." The four of them went back to Kyo's house and played around with his pet dog named Cooper for the rest of the day until his friends had to go on home.

Genin Arc
"Kawarimi no Jutsu!" . . . "Kawarimi no Jutsu!" Kyo sat down defeated before the empty pitcher that had so far bested him. Kyo wanted to join the ninja academy so badly but his father, Alistair Asakura, said that unless Kyo could perform a jutsu, he would not be allowed to join the academy. He decided on Kawarimi no Jutsu because his friend Joey, who was already in the academy, had mentioned that it was one of the jutsu that the academy would have him learn anyway. Days had passed and the pitcher remained undisturbed on it's small pedestal. Every day Kyo would go to his back yard and stare at the pedestal and try to switch places with it. Joey came over every now and then to try and help him but still Kyo had no luck. One day Kyo was determined that this would be the day he would swap places with the pitcher. He stomped outside and turned to the pitcher in anger. He could honestly say that he hated this pitcher more than anything else in the world at this point in his life and he was determined to show it who was the boss. "Haaaaaah! Kawarimi no Jutsu!" In a puff of smoke Kyo found himself on the pedestal and when he turned back he saw the pitcher back where he was. Before he could celebrate, the pedestal tipped over and Kyo fell over on his back. "No happy ending for me it seems..." Kyo sighed and took a nap right there on the dirt. The next day He enrolled in the acdemy, he was very excited about being there for the very first time. The first day he went in calmly sat down and did everything the the sensei told him to do. The next couple of day he did the same thing as the first time. After a week or so he started to daydream and fall asleep. He did that untill he graduated and became a genin. When he became a genin he got his own apartment.

RP Sample:The sun was low as the sky turned from blue to golden-red. The day had been a hard one for the young Jonin who dragged her feet into her quiet home. “ehk, note to self, rethink about not having a bottle of booze on the job…” she muttered half heartedly. She was not a real big drinker unless she was off duty, but sometimes she would just day dream about drinking during a hard day. She let her coat fall off her shoulders having a loud THUNK echo in the room. Her arm had a bloody bandage wrapped around it, a reward for a sudden uprising of birds chirping to hide the sound of a bandit’s throwing knife.

“Bastard,” she muttered to herself; she did that a lot, “at least I was able to pay him back with a broken jaw” she smirked as she walked through her home to get something to eat, and even a drink. ~Drink drink, and a bag of cheetos woohoo!~ she thought cheerfully with a smile as she placed her hand on the wall to help with her walking. She was not using her Chakra Flow, so she was completely in the dark at the time in this empty home.

Posts : 336 Reputation : 3 Join date : 2010-10-15

Great History, Great RP Sample, Great Personality Length. There is some things missing though... You still need to add an appearance in words, even if you have a picture, also, you don't start with jutsus, except the E rank, and you have to buy Sharingan... To buy jutsus after your character is made, check your points, goto the shop, and just buy. Sharingan is 1000 points, and jutsus just depend on the rank you are buying.

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Teh Kazekage~
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Posts : 8 Reputation : 1 Join date : 2010-11-19

Ok, thank you I have fixed it

Posts : 1602 Reputation : 15 Join date : 2010-08-17

Approved.