Amechi training post.. Again...[WIP]

Jutsu being learned.

Spoiler:

Amechi, in his cold, leather chair, sitting with the brisk, winter air flowing through his hair, Amechi is like freezing.. 'I hate the winter...' Amechi thought... 'I should create a jutsu... I feel random right now...' Amechi chuckled, 'But its the truth.. I should create a jutsu. A jutsu I can use to protect the village with, a strong jutsu. A jutsu that I can use, to... Protect the ones I love...' Amechi thought. Amechi grabbed his book, and started thinking of some ideas of the jutsu...

...Ideas...
Well.. I want it to be a powerful Metal Release Jutsu, a type of jutsu someone with sharingan can not copy. A jutsu for the lucky ones of the Kotora Clan that get Metal Release can use.... Well... Something that if someone touches it will slice and cut them... Something that if I touch it... It will not affect me... But it should be more then just Metal Release... It should also be.... Fire... What about a dragon? Yeah... A dragon... Not just any dragon... A Metal Dragon, that can slice up people from touch, he will have spikes everywhere, but when I touch him the spikes go down where my feet are, and it.. Can breathe fire!! I think this is a perfect jutsu... It will probably take me awhile to make this jutsu thought...

Amechi set off to his secret training place, thats hidden in a Sunagakure... Hidden from everyone... A wonderful place to practice the jutsu he is making.. A place to make history for his clan... Amechi arrived at the training place at 5 am sharp, ready to begin his jutsu creation. Amechi, slipped out his book, and decided what hand signs this amazing jutsus would require... Amechi, unwillingly... Began preforming the numerous hand signs needed to use this jutsu, as the last hand sign came, Amechi concentrated... Amechi created, basically a prototype, dragon. Amechi, observed the dragon... It was horrible.. It barely looked like a dragon! It looked more like a dis-formed dog with dis-formed wings! Amechi, disappointed.. Walked back to his building.. Slowly and sadly.. Amechi, lowered into the his leather chair, and sat in it... Gloomily... Amechi slipped out his book and began writing..

Well... The jutsu went horribly.. The jutsu was a complete failure... I, if you haven't read before, tried to create a Metal Dragon... But it didn't even look like a dragon... It looked like a dis-formed dog with wings.. It was the horrible... I didn't even have spikes! Such a failed attempt... Maybe I shold study some of the books on metal release my grandfatherw wrote...

Well... If you are reading this you are probably wondering about the incredible metal release you have acquired... Well.. Metal is like a wonderful, shining chakra... Shape it into the right form and you can do almost anything... But if you mess up... Don't give up! Its just your first try.. Everything takes some time you know! If you give up after your first dang try... Then why are you even part of this clan!!! If you are of my bloodline.. You are not a giver upper... If you are... Well.. You aren't of this clan fool! Now... Metal.. Is juts like building a puppet.. You have to give the parts the ability to move...

After reading that, Amechi started drawing the prototype..