Naraku Uchiha [Review]

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Character Appearance:
I rather like how you use words to force the reader to actually put them into their head and full them over. Slightly vein if I may say so myself you are slightly vain, but hey no harshness intended just that you do kinda give out that impression. Here is an extract ‘Why know, is this child with such beauty
So yeah I do kinda reckon that you did a rather good job, but it really does make me wonder if I really do need to write hundred and fifty words but no such luck.
Hmm I do like his picture though, a bit like my own. But it looks like his outfit is rather like my own even. So what now? Do I give failure or approval to this review? Find out, okay I like this part of that app and have read it over several times. I took one away because I didn’t think it was long enough for Kage.
Ratings: I’ll do it out of ten same for the rest of the app: 9\10-

Character personality:
Really the same as the personality, well apart from the fact that it is personality not appearance. And once again I’m seeing some rather large similarities between Azien and Naraku. Nice name by the way. It does look like he is a good Hokage, one benefiting the title and the Will of Fire.
He sounds very controlled and not at all self-centred. Looks like he is going to be rathe easy to RP with, no instant madness or other quirks that would make him over the top. A very modulated sort of ninja rather typical don’t you think? Still your wording makes reading this all the worth-while.
He is a good public speaker and doesn’t get flustered very easily, which makes my destructive self want to break him, make him scream and shout. But that isn’t the real me, just something that influences me at times. I like his qutoe and it fits. Still once again I reckon you didn’t write enough for the title of Kage. But look at me, I’m the same, so I know how you felt. Or at least why you chose that sort of personality.
Ratings:8\10-Kinda the same as all other Ninja.

Character Attributes Well I must say I’ve always had a soft spot for Fuuinjutsu, and have finally made a character myself that lets me use it, so at the sight of the word I feel my heart rate crank up. Kinda unusal, but then again that is how I always was so no biggy on my part.
And once again our characters prove to be simular. You chose Genjutsu,Taijutsu and Ninjutsu as part of it. Same with my app. Well your Sharingan mastery is pretty nice to read about, you kinda have an unusual way of saying it. Your Sharingan definitely gives back the Uchiha name proud. I surely wouldn’t want to face you in battle. But I probably will, I always say this like that and end up regretting them.
Hmm, you did good herem a bit unoriginal but understandable, it would be nice if you made more Uchiha based moves to make this unique I did see that you had done this a bit with the Fuuinjutsu stuff. I think I’ll give this a lower mark than I would usually would because I have to say it is pretty predicable about it. The quality of the work is nice, but it remains predicable.
Ratings: 7\10

Character Originality [See the Rest of the review]
Ratings: 6\10


Final Score:Okay there were four scoring categories I’m just add it up, 30\40…..unless my math is wrong, but I don’t think the score I put up it fairly accurate. So I’m gonna put up my own personal opinion of this app as well 38\40

Septimus wrote:

Character Appearance:
I rather like how you use words to force the reader to actually put them into their head and full them over. Slightly vein if I may say so myself you are slightly vain, but hey no harshness intended just that you do kinda give out that impression. Here is an extract ‘Why know, is this child with such beauty
So yeah I do kinda reckon that you did a rather good job, but it really does make me wonder if I really do need to write hundred and fifty words but no such luck.
Hmm I do like his picture though, a bit like my own. But it looks like his outfit is rather like my own even. So what now? Do I give failure or approval to this review? Find out, okay I like this part of that app and have read it over several times. I took one away because I didn’t think it was long enough for Kage.

Ratings: I’ll do it out of ten same for the rest of the app: 9\10-

Character personality:
Really the same as the personality, well apart from the fact that it is personality not appearance. And once again I’m seeing some rather large similarities between Azien and Naraku. Nice name by the way. It does look like he is a good Hokage, one benefiting the title and the Will of Fire.
He sounds very controlled and not at all self-centred. Looks like he is going to be rathe easy to RP with, no instant madness or other quirks that would make him over the top. A very modulated sort of ninja rather typical don’t you think? Still your wording makes reading this all the worth-while.
He is a good public speaker and doesn’t get flustered very easily, which makes my destructive self want to break him, make him scream and shout. But that isn’t the real me, just something that influences me at times. I like his qutoe and it fits. Still once again I reckon you didn’t write enough for the title of Kage. But look at me, I’m the same, so I know how you felt. Or at least why you chose that sort of personality.

Ratings:8\10-Kinda the same as all other Ninja.

Character Attributes Well I must say I’ve always had a soft spot for Fuuinjutsu, and have finally made a character myself that lets me use it, so at the sight of the word I feel my heart rate crank up. Kinda unusal, but then again that is how I always was so no biggy on my part.
And once again our characters prove to be simular. You chose Genjutsu,Taijutsu and Ninjutsu as part of it. Same with my app. Well your Sharingan mastery is pretty nice to read about, you kinda have an unusual way of saying it. Your Sharingan definitely gives back the Uchiha name proud. I surely wouldn’t want to face you in battle. But I probably will, I always say this like that and end up regretting them.
Hmm, you did good herem a bit unoriginal but understandable, it would be nice if you made more Uchiha based moves to make this unique I did see that you had done this a bit with the Fuuinjutsu stuff. I think I’ll give this a lower mark than I would usually would because I have to say it is pretty predicable about it. The quality of the work is nice, but it remains predicable.

Ratings: 7\10

Character Originality [See the Rest of the review]
Ratings: 6\10


Final Score:Okay there were four scoring categories I’m just add it up, 30\40…..unless my math is wrong, but I don’t think the score I put up it fairly accurate. So I’m gonna put up my own personal opinion of this app as well 38\40

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