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| Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru | |
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.Addiction
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| Subject: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Thu Sep 23, 2010 9:29 pm | |
| :: Basic Information :: Name: Kogara "Koga" Mitsuru -- Nicknames: Yuri, Demi-God's Wrath, Perfection Gender: Male Zodiac Sign: Unknown Birth Date: 8/31/96 Blood Type: AB Weight: 124 lbs Height: 5'4 Rank: Genin - C-Skilled Village: Iwagakure No Sato :: Character Looks and Personality :: Appearance: - Spoiler:
Attire:- Spoiler:
- The Demented God in a Child's Body known as Koga the Apostle of Wrath, or Yuri or Perfection. Koga sports a thin white short sleeved shirt along with with shinobi shoes. He wears an eye-patch that covers his left eye. It seems that his eye color is amber and he has feline eyes. Along with that he sports black, fingerless gloves that matches his black pants and black jacket with deep pink interior coloring. However that is just his usually everyday attire. Koga, also sports just the thin white and black pants with white shinobi shoes and on occassions he wears his orange stray jacket.
Personality: - Spoiler:
Koga is a calm, cool and collected kinda guy. When around his family, well his sisters. He opens up more, and shows his more communitive side where as when he is not around them. He rarely speaks unless his absolutely have too. Y'see, Koga is extremely different from most. When the time comes, he would put forth his best efforts to help out but would barely communicate while doing it. It's pretty difficult to explain the way Koga operates. Maybe it's because of his mother leaving him to chase after a man that didn't want her. Koga didn't know the true goal of why his mother left. She was planning to end his father's life. Yukina, his older sister is the only one who truely knew her intentions. The half siblings were forced to move into the village's orphanage where they might stay until they grow up, or until Yukina gets old enough to live on her own and adopt Koga and Kura. He is also protective, he doesn't like the way guys look at his older sister, with lust in their eyes and all kinds of negative thoughts in their head. He would snap if he could but he holds himself back and doesn't even have a reason too. He just does. While his little sister gets picked on for being a bit different than most. She is quiet aswell but it's something about her. She is more insightful than most kids her age. The girls that usually picks on her and bullies her always have to answer to Koga. Koga knows this because Kura would come home sad and even more depressed than she looked. Koga would demand a name of the person causing her such grief and go to them, "handlin' buisness". Koga does not really like or care for Snow. Infact he really dislike Winter and would rather do missions in either hot or warm weather. He doesn't eat meat of any kind, he eats fruits and vegatables, but prefers sweets. His favorite sweet is Cookies, his favorite fruit is watermelon and his favorite animal is the Cat/Feline family.
Popularity, is something Koga was known for in the academy. Slightly older than most in his academy. He was popular for many things. Those things include, "Protective and Caring", "Acting Cool", "Awesome ninja", "Mysterious", "Good looking" and much more. Y'see, the reason why he was popular for all those things is because they seen the way he protects his little sister. They think it's pretty heroic and the females took note of that. The guys didn't really care but they saw the way the girls liked it. Sometimes they would mimic what Koga did to look appealing to the girls so they can get the attention. It didn't work most of the time. They saw a more heroic side to Koga, something they liked alot. Something else the girls liked was his way to 'Act Cool', which meant the way he talked, acted, did things that amazed the females and things that they like while slowly ticking the males off by the way he acted. He never really insulted someone, he would just usually walk away if they wanted to fight. If they attack first he would quickly put them down fast and walk away. Making him look like the better and stronger person. Being an awesome ninja is another category he was popular for. Y'see, by him being the male shinobi, he took it upon himself that he would get stronger and protect his sisters himself so he worked extremely hard to make sure that goal was achieved till the end. It was showed in his grades, he was very skilled as an academy student. Having his classmates believe he is strong, talented and smart. More good publicity for Koga it seemed and it was all for a good deed. Thus he is also mostly famous for his lack of communication and his mysterious ways that leave people wanting more. They want to know what he's gonna do or say. The females are usually drawn to him by his mysterious ways while the males want him to stop. The last and most misc category he is popular for is his so called, 'Good looks' His looks aren't anything special within the his clan but to outsiders, especially girl's around his age. He seems to be rather appealing to them and doesn't really knows it. These are the things that makes up Koga, the personality traits. Y'see Koga's personality is so strong it effects the people around him.
- Due to his Kekkei Genkai and it's possible side effects, Koga started to grow a more demented personality after his transformation. Changing him into a more intellegent, strong, powerful yet dramatically insane person. Koga suffers from partial off and on dementia which means Koga becomes insane occasionally and although he is demented, he does have a caring side to him. It is unknown what triggers the special case of dementia in his body but when it does it's a hazard. However it's mostly towards food, killing, and towards Rangiku who acts as his "medication" when he goes off the wall. He wouldn't dare harm her and in return she wouldn't dare harm him. The medication of which I speak of is Rangiku, the female partner, friend and somewhat guardian would have the melodious voice that he loves to hear which is the sound of her voice that soothes the rage down and the touch of her skin. It not really anything special about her. It's just the connection he feels towards her that allows him to remember his sanity and slow down or stop.
:: Character Clan :: - Spoiler:
- Quote :
- Posthumanism and Evolution
- Reaching Posthumanism to clan members is called "Rise to Demi-God" and sometimes given the title of "Demi-God" or "Apostle".This are gained the amazing ability to evolve from the regular, everyday human being into a much more intellectual, physically stronger, and philosophical human being. Reaching the highest peek of evolution. This is preformed on random, on a recorded pattern after the age of twelve, clan members have been seen with a bright light shining from their chest that gets brighter and brighter by the second, making a person have to cover their eyes and in moments. The clan member is with a pure white, somewhat transparent orb. That orb would then take only moments before it hatches a brand new version of the original that under gone the transformation. This transformation is called "Transhumanism" which allows the clan members to undergo a transformation into posthumanism which is the ultimate human being. Being immune to disease, poison except the very strong and powerful ones. On the more plus side, it gives the clan members enhances durability, endurance, strength, intellegence, speed and agility aswell as other attribute enhancements. Clan members become the ultimate human beings, and by them being a clan that are part of the shinobi society. They can be refered to as the ultimate shinobis aswell. Being able to take on and do countless of things. However their is a price, some clan members have caught many mental illnesses in return such as partial dementia or off and on some kind of mental disturbance. Some are lucky enough to escape scott-free. There is also the side effect of becoming a cannibal aswell, longing for the taste of human flesh. The best tasting would be children and babies. Clan members, by them being the so called, "Ultimate Human Beings". They are able to remember things from when they were younger, aswell as learn and comprehend things better and faster aswell. Allowing them to master new things. To outsiders, their Kekkei Genkai is refered to as a Gift.
- Clan members, at birth, are granted with Dust Release which is the elemental release that allows clan members to use their Dust Release to pulverize their opponents and targets to a molecular sized dust.
Character History and RP Sample History: - Spoiler:
He was always an odd child from the beginning, unlike other children that will play and horse around. He would sit alone and read his clan ancient books and texts. Sitting alone as he got lost within the ancient words his ancestors woke and written. Reading almost immediately the ancient language they spoke. He was intrigued by his family and their past. He was intrigued by what's out their in other words. He trained to get stronger to find those place. Locate those answers on his own. In a flash he was gaining stronger by the instant physically. Training hand to hand combat, disarms and purely focused on strategy and quick thinking. As the children laughed and played around. Giggling as they played games with each other, bonding and making a relationship with each other. A true friendship. Something Koga never really experienced. Koga's friend was his mind and his books. His hard work and dedication were his buddies and his goals were his pals until he reached the academy. The ninja academy that is. He was young like all the other kids, inexperienced as a ninja but truly experienced as a thinker, a strategist and was evolving in physical combat. Debating wasn't much of an option with Koga for he won arguments using logical terms and philosophy of course. Even though his intellegence on philosophy was still inexperienced, he knew more about it than average kids. During the academy as they took field trips around the village, playing laughing and having fun. Their was two female children who were truly best friends, they stuck by each other all the time through thick and then which taught Koga about teamwork and cooperation, something he read within his clan ancient books.
The girls were walking beside Koga one day on the academy's field trip to the Kage building and one of the girls really liked Koga. She had a crush on him while the other one was devolping true feelings for Koga. For some reason they were attracted to the mysterious and non-talkative type of person. Both of those girls decided to make a pact that whoever gets him first gets to be with him without the other being jealous. As they made their wager, that day Koga got really popular and more involved with the children around him unwanted of course. The two girls smothered him with love and compasion by giving him flowers and hugs infront of other kids which he didn't really like because they were children and he didn't really care for women at the time. He was getting embarrassed and he didn't want to be mean so he tried to tell one of the girls that he didn't feel the same way infront of the class. It just so happens she took the news the wrong way and punched Koga out of his seat which led to him being mocked by his classmates. Engulfed in total embarrassment, Koga ran home angered to no end. He knew he oculdn't show his face at the academy again. He had one choice and that was to conceal his face from the academy. The next day, right before school he went to a clothing store and bought a mask for his face. It was to keep the kids from knowing who he is which was a stupid idea know that he thinks about it. Seeing as the children has assigned seats, he will have to sit where Koga sits. No this is not a personality shift when he dawns the mask on his face, he just feels comfortable with the mask on and he can express himself more. One day he was sitting agaisnt a tree when three guys came over to him, blocking the very sunlight he needed to finish writting his poetry. The guys looked like they mean buisness. The guys were around Koga's age and the setting was the Academy's park were all the other children played. At first the children were afraid of Koga wearing the mask but they grown to like him and thought he was cool and unique. Three guys didn't like the publicity and popularity Koga was getting, they were jealous and wanted to beat him up. Koga showed his hand to hand combat skills he learned and trained that day. The children that watched the three guys get beat up were amazed and officially made Koga the most popular guy in the academy. They were afraid but respected him. Over time things didn't change and he felt the need to always wear the mask to feel important. He graduated the exams of course as he went on to become an official ninja.
RP Sample: - Spoiler:
The Diary of Liberation
Jeremiah is his name. He always wanted to be himself and not be hassled about it is what he always wanted. Jeremiah has a very complex personality in which he thinks outside the box. He is very playful, and is not afraid to tell people. He was always something special and something different and although he had many close friends, he wouldn’t dare share his feelings, thoughts and personality with his friends. Jeremiah isn’t brilliant, but he’s smart and he is just very insightful. He can easily analyze situations in third person thought and pick apart the situation to try and find ways to help and also find the moral or value in the situation. He loves the unordinary, the strange and the things people wouldn’t really want to know about. He enjoys and finds himself interested in many things such as science, writing, poetry, comedy, grammar, dancing, music, and many more things. Some would compare his personality to a free spirited, insightful young fellow. However this is not the Jeremiah you will get to know reading this story. The Jeremiah you will get to know is the personality that covers his true personality and the lesson he learns.
One morning, as Jeremiah was getting ready to go to school. He lived with his mother and although he had a lot of nice things in his room, his mother didn’t have a lot of money to give him. Somehow she would conjure up some money for him to keep in his pocket and even though it’s not a lot, Jeremiah never complained about it. At home and around his family, Jeremiah was known as the smart young boy who wanted a bright future. He was also the guy that got everything he wanted as rewards for doing well in school. His family made jokes around him and say he’s spoiled but he always had a strange feeling that they were serious. Spoiled in the term of getting what you want. Jeremiah waited to leave out for school with his friend, Jamie. Jamie was a nice young boy. He was respectful, fun, funny and nice. “Where could he be?” Jeremiah said as he sat in his bedroom, on the foot of the bed, watching his favorite television show. Jeremiah was quite impatient as he awaited for his friend to arrive at his house so they could leave out for school together. “School starts at 9:00 and it’s already 8:32. We are gonna be late.” He said in frustration as he scratched his head roughly. He took a quick breather and decided to turn off his television and leave without Jamie. Jamie was never this late and something must be wrong. Jeremiah didn’t get a call from Jamie saying he wasn’t coming to school today either so Jeremiah was going to Jamie’s house instead for a change. Jeremiah walked into the living room and grabbed his red and black colored backpack and walked towards the kitchen which was connected to the living room. He walked to the refrigerator and opened it up to see there was nothing inside. It must be hard financial times and this is proof. He thought it must be hard on his mother if things are this bad. He sighed as he closed the refrigerator door and turned towards the front door. He walked towards the door, easing on his backpack and yelling, “I’m leaving’!”
“Alright Don’t lose that bus card!” his mother shouted in response. Jeremiah continued and left out of the home to get a very unexpected welcome from someone familiar. “Gonna leave without me?” Jamie said with a confused expression on his face. Jamie was just joking and Jeremiah knew that as well. Jeremiah didn’t take what he said seriously and responded, “Shut up and let’s go.” Jeremiah said as he began walking to the train station and Jamie quickly followed beside him. Engaging in conversation the whole way to school about Jamie’s excuse on why he was late to arrive at Jeremiah’s house. It was another excuse that Jeremiah accepted. He really didn’t care why he was late, as long as Jamie was alright.
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| Subject: Re: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Sat Oct 30, 2010 9:47 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Sun Nov 07, 2010 11:28 am | |
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| Subject: Re: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:08 pm | |
| You need to add details to Personality and attire. Also Your RP sample you o realize you will have to post like that all the time. | |
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| Subject: Re: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Sun Nov 07, 2010 2:53 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:05 pm | |
| Ok in all honesty i have to say that KKG looks overpowered. You even refer to it as Demi-God in the explanation. I mean, touching someone and they turn to stone as well as immune to all poisons and disabilities? That's just my opinion. I'll leave the final call up to Alpha but i have to say no... | |
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| Subject: Re: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:15 pm | |
| Tis the ability of Onoki and it's called Nature Transformation, they didnt show or tell how he got it so I made it a training requirement for that ability or would it be better to take out the whole thing? e.e I mean, They would have to go through intense training to gain it and then more training to master it so they dont turn themselves into stone y'know?
The Posthumanism ability is just genetic mutation and evolution. We can still die just not from disease, poison and aging. The process of transhumanism(transforming into posthumanism) is random and it can be stopped by killing them while they're in the transformation orb. I mean we also get dementia as a downfall :O I can take out disability. That does seem abit too much :O Tis like I broke a Mitsuru's leg but all of a sudden its fixed which I can even see is bs. | |
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| Subject: Re: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:18 pm | |
| genetic mutation and evolution = kekkei genkai. Not being able to die from disease, poison, or aging of any kind = Vampire I still think it's OP. Just the whole idea of it seems like you're this walking, self healing, stone turning, creature who never dies of age at all.... | |
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| Subject: Re: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Sun Nov 07, 2010 3:23 pm | |
| Lmao Ok fine. No stone conversion ability and I can die from aging. Deal? :3 | |
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| Subject: Re: Koga "Demigod's Wrath" Mitsuru Sun Nov 07, 2010 4:00 pm | |
| Since you took out flying as well, for now atleast i'm going to approve this.
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